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The story line was peak but the execution was SH*T

Weeb June 7, 2026 10:29 am

I’m gonna start off by stating that this is not gonna be a story for everybody. This story is a complex narrative and if you’re not used to reading, psychological thrillers or a plot that’s not expectable you you’re not just gonna get lost. You’re gonna feel like you’re in a whole other dimension.

Anyways, I really enjoyed the story. I don’t wanna put any spoilers in this review, but I do wanna let you guys know that when you’re reading this go into this with an investigate of state of mind.

The story is not for the week. The pacing is awful. There is barely any buildup leading to the smut and it leaves the reader feeling like it was unnecessary and out of place. But the plot was so good that it made me forgive the poor writing style. I love the idea that was put into the story. Definitely give this a read.

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