I'm done. The author makes the lead act completely nonsensically. "Oh a second star appeared, and he's so dangerous we should run away, but he got caught? Lets secretly go meet him in prison! Wonderful idea! Oh and lets make sure we stand so close that he could grab me while there!" "Oh he's blackmailing me? Lets be a meek little puppy and do exactly as he says! What could go wrong right?!"
On that note, how "convenient" for that other star to be able to manipulate other stars like that. And how "convenient" that he happened to have a bottle on him that can seal a star away. It's not like you'd be stripped of all your possessions when thrown in prison or anything. And on top of that even, clearly the author has no clue how to advance the story. (Something that wouldn't even be that hard to write considering the lead's personality) As he used this situation to "conveniently" make her save that boy in the mirror, and move her towards the academy in such a lazy and forced way.
I'm done. The author makes the lead act completely nonsensically. "Oh a second star appeared, and he's so dangerous we should run away, but he got caught? Lets secretly go meet him in prison! Wonderful idea! Oh and lets make sure we stand so close that he could grab me while there!" "Oh he's blackmailing me? Lets be a meek little puppy and do exactly as he says! What could go wrong right?!"
On that note, how "convenient" for that other star to be able to manipulate other stars like that. And how "convenient" that he happened to have a bottle on him that can seal a star away. It's not like you'd be stripped of all your possessions when thrown in prison or anything. And on top of that even, clearly the author has no clue how to advance the story. (Something that wouldn't even be that hard to write considering the lead's personality) As he used this situation to "conveniently" make her save that boy in the mirror, and move her towards the academy in such a lazy and forced way.