I think I liked the concept at first, and the MC’s design & personality — a little unhinged. It was enjoyable for maybe a minute before it started to fall extremely flat, I don’t think any of the characters are well fleshed at at all in the slightest? MC has almost no family or a genuine support system in his life besides maybe his one friend, but we don’t see this reflected anywhere in the story as either a conflict or developing his character further, it honestly just feels like a plot device & an attempt to make MC unique. Secondly, isn’t the ML a little too dumb? He radiates this strict, know it too well guy but in reality he falls for dumb little tricks and lets himself be persuaded by this highschooler. On the contrary, I am a big fan of the art styles & some of the panels (specifically the very colorful ones) it adds deeper meaning to certain scenes. I also like the jokes where MC is obviously overthinking everything as sexual & the commentary in reference to that.
I think I liked the concept at first, and the MC’s design & personality — a little unhinged. It was enjoyable for maybe a minute before it started to fall extremely flat, I don’t think any of the characters are well fleshed at at all in the slightest? MC has almost no family or a genuine support system in his life besides maybe his one friend, but we don’t see this reflected anywhere in the story as either a conflict or developing his character further, it honestly just feels like a plot device & an attempt to make MC unique. Secondly, isn’t the ML a little too dumb? He radiates this strict, know it too well guy but in reality he falls for dumb little tricks and lets himself be persuaded by this highschooler. On the contrary, I am a big fan of the art styles & some of the panels (specifically the very colorful ones) it adds deeper meaning to certain scenes. I also like the jokes where MC is obviously overthinking everything as sexual & the commentary in reference to that.