Idk as much as I love and I'm enjoying the story, the chapters are really short and some memories and scenes are being repeated it kinda feels all over the place. Things should be more straightforward since this is the backstory. I'll probably get eaten alive for saying this
not gonna eat you alive, but i think it should be more straightforward when binging everything at once instead of reading it weekly if you get me. and with traumatic memories, theyre usually really hard to remember and disorientated, so that could be intentional too..
Idk as much as I love and I'm enjoying the story, the chapters are really short and some memories and scenes are being repeated it kinda feels all over the place. Things should be more straightforward since this is the backstory. I'll probably get eaten alive for saying this