I like the art and the story is pretty good but the BDSM ruined it for me, I hate BDSM.

I will say this is very much bad stigmatized bdsm. The bdsm community is truly and fully into actual consent, comfort and pleasure for ALL parties. That includes communication before anything is tried AND aftercare prior. This rapey top dom stuff ≠ BDSM just because someone is tied and gagged.

this is called torture, not bdsm LOL