the quality difference between S1 writing and S2 is so striking. in S1 there is a lottt of risk and tension i remember it always put me on edge. both has so much to lose, the angst always lingers. S2, there’s no risk whatsoever. no conflict between the two main cast, only exterior problem that just doesn’t seems urgent enough. it needs more yearning, more angst. is this what happened in the novel? i feel like the phasing is the problem and it could be just a webtoon problem not the novel/story.
the quality difference between S1 writing and S2 is so striking. in S1 there is a lottt of risk and tension i remember it always put me on edge. both has so much to lose, the angst always lingers. S2, there’s no risk whatsoever. no conflict between the two main cast, only exterior problem that just doesn’t seems urgent enough. it needs more yearning, more angst. is this what happened in the novel? i feel like the phasing is the problem and it could be just a webtoon problem not the novel/story.