I was going to say the same thing like one ch he is disgusted and next second he is obsessed ?? He isn't get hard with him now only ? That doesn't make sense even if it is a short story but guess everything can make sense in bl lol
Damm srry for the bad grammar in middle i didn't double check to correct it
right?? i’ve read other short stories where you can feel the love between the characters even if it’s a little bit fast-paced, but i’m just so dissatisfied with the resolve in this story
i knew it was a short story so i wasn’t expecting a slow burn romance but it still felt so forced? one second he swears he’s not even gay and the next he actually has fallen for him, what?? kind of a let down, it had really great potential but whatever