All in all the plot has a lot of potential. What it means to be a sensitive child or an unemotional, godly with supernatural powers both in essence wanting to be loved. I think it could've been very poetic and even a little harrowing but instead it felt a bit like a fever dream. Ch.7 makes me understand the vibe the author was going for but I either wish it was a bit longer or better fleshed out.
All in all the plot has a lot of potential. What it means to be a sensitive child or an unemotional, godly with supernatural powers both in essence wanting to be loved. I think it could've been very poetic and even a little harrowing but instead it felt a bit like a fever dream. Ch.7 makes me understand the vibe the author was going for but I either wish it was a bit longer or better fleshed out.