My one critique is that Kim Dan is too much of a soft marshmallow. Timid, withdrawn and pathetic was how he was portrayed, could have been better at that front. A fiery bottom (regardless of his past) to match Jaekyung’s energy would have brought some edgy fun. Each to their own. Agree that it was rushed and even the ending was awkward. There wasn’t much to progress with the plot with so many cliches. Typical granny upbringing, bullying, loan sharks etc. Development of the plot and the characters were sub-par, mostly running away from their feelings and even if there were attempts to bring one or the other back, there were no attempts to relay their thoughts across (Fudge..really? If you liked someone, wouldn’t you be persistent and unwilling to give up? At the least, wouldn’t you confess until their ears bleed? Or give them an unexpected hug, apologise and walk away no matter how they reacted? Just saying). I was excited cause the author was bringing the MMA scene to the BL world but maybe there ought to be a solid foundation first for a BL classic to be born. Oh well.
are you fr defending this STORY?
Damn near everyone shitting on this story, but I know there's WAY worse out there. None of y'all got story writing experience, but talking like y'all do. Lol. Save your shitty biased two cents and go read something else. For the people actually giving constructive criticism, thank you.