The foundation for Ian's obsession with Benjamin feels janky. I think the manhwa could have solidified their (fucked up) relationship further by giving both of them more time to expound on their similarities. Like, their connection feels so shallow to me because Ian and Ben are conveniently written to embrace one another so abruptly. It wouldn't hurt to slow down the pace a bit. I don't even wanna start with Ben—I don't think I need to it's kinda obvious. Ik this manhwa is porn first before the plot but I can't ignore the writing anymore.
The foundation for Ian's obsession with Benjamin feels janky. I think the manhwa could have solidified their (fucked up) relationship further by giving both of them more time to expound on their similarities. Like, their connection feels so shallow to me because Ian and Ben are conveniently written to embrace one another so abruptly. It wouldn't hurt to slow down the pace a bit. I don't even wanna start with Ben—I don't think I need to it's kinda obvious. Ik this manhwa is porn first before the plot but I can't ignore the writing anymore.