Agreed, although in saying that, this was published 2 years BEFORE Chameleon wa Tenohira, so it's impressive how much the author improved in that time!
to be fair Teku Rin only did the artwork for this story, the writer was yazirushi label. I'm not a huge fan of the writing but the artwork is still really good imo
The contrast with Chameleon wa Tenohira is just insane. The latter being so much better and meaningful