the flower metaphor was as subtle as a sledgehammer, i think they can calm down
it was alright i guess, the dialogue & acting was a little unnatural though... and the same issue as the metaphor, everything was very textual & forcibly faux deep; like you're literally making a manga, trust the visual aspect of the medium a bit more ! and do some more thematic research.
the flower metaphor was as subtle as a sledgehammer, i think they can calm down
it was alright i guess, the dialogue & acting was a little unnatural though... and the same issue as the metaphor, everything was very textual & forcibly faux deep; like you're literally making a manga, trust the visual aspect of the medium a bit more ! and do some more thematic research.