Currently reading this newly rn and hmm the second couple is pissing me off... like not the characters themselves but the fact THAT WE HAVE TO SWITCH SCENE WITH THEM EVERY FEW CHAPTERS ITS SO ANNOYING Like I wanna know what happens to the main character first??? And I dont even get why I should care bout them rn I'm more concerned of the 1st couple baby and if they're gonna get together or not and they THEY KEEP INTERRUPTING
Authors genuinely need to improve pacing and balance the narrative esp when they want to write a 2nd couple. Like either write the transition smoothly between couples or just wait to focus on the 2nd couple in the side storiesT^T
Currently reading this newly rn and hmm the second couple is pissing me off... like not the characters themselves but the fact THAT WE HAVE TO SWITCH SCENE WITH THEM EVERY FEW CHAPTERS ITS SO ANNOYING Like I wanna know what happens to the main character first??? And I dont even get why I should care bout them rn I'm more concerned of the 1st couple baby and if they're gonna get together or not and they THEY KEEP INTERRUPTING
Sigh.. hopefully the pacing will get better