I'm so tired of the mean comments about this series. i honestly can't tell if people are pretending or if they genuinely hate it that much but it's getting exhausting. i completely understand not liking the art style because it's pretty raw and nasty, there's a lot of bodily fluids and its true that the dicks are ugly. But not liking the art is very different from saying the story itself is bad. Personally, i think the story is good and decent. Even the sexual interactions are incredibly well written like, tell me when an AI is going to come up with a scene where a top gets off just by smelling his bottom's shirt without even touching himself. That scene was incredible i locked in immediately.
yes, the second couple's arc was longer and more dramatic, but the desperation of the second top is written so well. Just because something isn't your taste doesn't mean it's poorly written. You're simply not the target audience, and THATS FINE go read jinx or whatever. so please let the people who do enjoy it have their space instead of filling every comment section with "don't bother reading this."
Something else people never talk about is how good the transition between the first and second couple was. The first couple's dynamic was a little confusing to me, and i probably need to reread it to appreciate it more, but Norman's transition from a secondary character to the main protagonist was handled perfectly and it feels like people completely ignore it because theyve already decided the series is bad.
That's why i find it ridiculous when people reduce the entire series to just porn... those comments honestly feel completely lacking in critical thinking, is sad that this work seems to have reached the wrong audience. You guys are always asking for yearning, pathetic, desperate tops who are obsessed with their bottoms, and that's literally what the second couple gives. and i love the current couple too btw
I'm so tired of the mean comments about this series. i honestly can't tell if people are pretending or if they genuinely hate it that much but it's getting exhausting. i completely understand not liking the art style because it's pretty raw and nasty, there's a lot of bodily fluids and its true that the dicks are ugly. But not liking the art is very different from saying the story itself is bad. Personally, i think the story is good and decent. Even the sexual interactions are incredibly well written like, tell me when an AI is going to come up with a scene where a top gets off just by smelling his bottom's shirt without even touching himself. That scene was incredible i locked in immediately.
yes, the second couple's arc was longer and more dramatic, but the desperation of the second top is written so well. Just because something isn't your taste doesn't mean it's poorly written. You're simply not the target audience, and THATS FINE go read jinx or whatever. so please let the people who do enjoy it have their space instead of filling every comment section with "don't bother reading this."
Something else people never talk about is how good the transition between the first and second couple was. The first couple's dynamic was a little confusing to me, and i probably need to reread it to appreciate it more, but Norman's transition from a secondary character to the main protagonist was handled perfectly and it feels like people completely ignore it because theyve already decided the series is bad.
That's why i find it ridiculous when people reduce the entire series to just porn... those comments honestly feel completely lacking in critical thinking, is sad that this work seems to have reached the wrong audience. You guys are always asking for yearning, pathetic, desperate tops who are obsessed with their bottoms, and that's literally what the second couple gives. and i love the current couple too btw