It would've benefited by having the revenge pullout more built up, it's not like it wasn't foreshadowed in the first place, but it wasn't prepped enough, so when it happened it didn't feel as satisfying. I just felt blue balled and still had pent up frustration on behalf of the uke. Now this could've been resolved if the after scenes were great too, but it was a little light and rushed compared to the intense gravity of the revenge arc.
Not a bad story, but what makes every average story frustrating for me is I can clearly see how it could've been directed better, but I can't do anything about it lol. At least reading an outright bad story is kinda camp.
It would've benefited by having the revenge pullout more built up, it's not like it wasn't foreshadowed in the first place, but it wasn't prepped enough, so when it happened it didn't feel as satisfying. I just felt blue balled and still had pent up frustration on behalf of the uke. Now this could've been resolved if the after scenes were great too, but it was a little light and rushed compared to the intense gravity of the revenge arc.
Not a bad story, but what makes every average story frustrating for me is I can clearly see how it could've been directed better, but I can't do anything about it lol. At least reading an outright bad story is kinda camp.