The ending feels unresolved. How are you going to introduce two major subplot climaxes (technically the undercurrent of ML family drama’s been there, just came to a head stacked on death of MC’s deadbeat dad) and not follow through to a resolution with either.
This was not a ride off on the sunset moment, friend. You read someone else’s room.
Like are they both jobless now? On the run from his hating ass daddy who still knows his address? Permanently traumatized because they refuse to believe sex can’t solve everything? Did she really order steak pizza? The people want to know.
The ending feels unresolved. How are you going to introduce two major subplot climaxes (technically the undercurrent of ML family drama’s been there, just came to a head stacked on death of MC’s deadbeat dad) and not follow through to a resolution with either.
This was not a ride off on the sunset moment, friend. You read someone else’s room.
Like are they both jobless now? On the run from his hating ass daddy who still knows his address? Permanently traumatized because they refuse to believe sex can’t solve everything? Did she really order steak pizza? The people want to know.