Since people like putting stuff in other people's mouth for giving feedback, I'd like to say that I'm still grateful to the team behind this story and I'd say that it's pretty fun and quirky in its own way. The short feedback I'm about to give doesn't diminish these good points and can still stand separately alongside it.
The pacing started out okay until the whole crew got stuck on an island and now it kind of feels like the important parts of the story is getting dragged out while the sideplots (that should have been built up from the beginning) are being pushed faster.
Shit keeps getting delayed because the two idiots (main couple) can't stop touching each other the build up on the main couple's relationship was OKAY until it started to feel like there's so much unnecessary smut (like I'm all for the open smut but damn) it feels like it's currently being used a crutch in moments where things need to progress but they didn't know how to do so in the story
Since people like putting stuff in other people's mouth for giving feedback, I'd like to say that I'm still grateful to the team behind this story and I'd say that it's pretty fun and quirky in its own way. The short feedback I'm about to give doesn't diminish these good points and can still stand separately alongside it.
The pacing started out okay until the whole crew got stuck on an island and now it kind of feels like the important parts of the story is getting dragged out while the sideplots (that should have been built up from the beginning) are being pushed faster.
Shit keeps getting delayed because the two idiots (main couple) can't stop touching each other the build up on the main couple's relationship was OKAY until it started to feel like there's so much unnecessary smut (like I'm all for the open smut but damn) it feels like it's currently being used a crutch in moments where things need to progress but they didn't know how to do so in the story