Sorry, guys! During system maintenance, some functions like comment are unavailable.

why does the author keep introducing new girls (I know some aren’t new) like if your sto...

starbursts June 14, 2026 7:05 am

why does the author keep introducing new girls (I know some aren’t new) like if your story can’t move forward without having to introduce multiple potential rivals then it’s okay to put the pen down

Responses
    iuhuihuhbhvgv June 14, 2026 11:05 am

    which are you referring to? its only been like 2, and it makes sense cause hes in this big conglomerate family ofc they're gonna be trying to set him up like crazy

    starbursts June 14, 2026 3:10 pm
    which are you referring to? its only been like 2, and it makes sense cause hes in this big conglomerate family ofc they're gonna be trying to set him up like crazy iuhuihuhbhvgv

    yes I’m aware! but at this point it doesn’t even fully explore those issues, the plot constantly fluctuates and it’s literally not going anywhere really

    iuhuihuhbhvgv June 14, 2026 7:40 pm
    yes I’m aware! but at this point it doesn’t even fully explore those issues, the plot constantly fluctuates and it’s literally not going anywhere really starbursts

    yeah i would say its too twisty-turny without a good direction, and some plot points are def better than others. its enjoyable enough but the beginning was so much better