The art is pretty wonky at first but by the end you can tell they are impoving. The story has a good premise but they don't bother to flesh it out at all. It's hard to tell the time line because it focuses almost exclusively on their relationship and no outside events. It could take place over a few weeks or a year. Impossible to tell. There are only like 7 total characters, all the backround characters literally have no faces. We get no backround info on any of the characters except mc was not interested in responsibility and ml had a sick mom. The villains reason for doing what he does is explained in like 2 panels and doesn't make any sense. The ending is incredibly rushed and important points are often skipped over entirely. Their relationship is cute, they are definitely improving on the art and the they are really good at drawing hair. The main characters personalities are enjoyable neither of them are annoying. It has a interesting premise that if fleshed out I would be interested in reading. Overall a 3.5 star Cute but missing alot of things
Review with spoilers
The art is pretty wonky at first but by the end you can tell they are impoving. The story has a good premise but they don't bother to flesh it out at all. It's hard to tell the time line because it focuses almost exclusively on their relationship and no outside events. It could take place over a few weeks or a year. Impossible to tell. There are only like 7 total characters, all the backround characters literally have no faces. We get no backround info on any of the characters except mc was not interested in responsibility and ml had a sick mom. The villains reason for doing what he does is explained in like 2 panels and doesn't make any sense. The ending is incredibly rushed and important points are often skipped over entirely.
Their relationship is cute, they are definitely improving on the art and the they are really good at drawing hair. The main characters personalities are enjoyable neither of them are annoying. It has a interesting premise that if fleshed out I would be interested in reading.
Overall a 3.5 star Cute but missing alot of things