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THANK YOUUUUU OMFG
This was exactly what I was saying/thinking. I'm so glad I'm not alone in this. Like I've read some slop porn reads before that have plot. It's totally possible. I deadass feel so let down by this.
bro… the seme’s character is literally written like a dildo… like i wasn’t expecting much relationship building, learning of the semes intentions and backstory due to the length of the bl, BUT I wasn’t expecting it to be THIS much of a slop read.
also the dick beads just magically appearing after having not been there.
ALSO ALSO, what else was the uke going to assume other than fuckbuddies when the seme hadn’t uttered a WORD of affection or a HINT that he might like him back. EVEN the semes internal monologue was dreading “taking responsibility” and dating the uke after the first time they had sex.
AGAIN I GET this is meant to be a slop read… but not this poorly written.