I feel like this story had great potential because of its “interesting” plot, however, over the span of 7 chapters the story has advanced wayyy to quickly. I would have definitely loved to see the development they have now had been expanded to 20 chapters rather than 7.
I feel like this story had great potential because of its “interesting” plot, however, over the span of 7 chapters the story has advanced wayyy to quickly. I would have definitely loved to see the development they have now had been expanded to 20 chapters rather than 7.