So many flaws in the plot and relationships, way too much context left behind and the rush of chemistry just left me unsatisfied. The creepy side of ML was brushed off too quickly and MC has no boundaries despite being shown he's a fighter who wont take shit so easily. Creepy insane stalker also doesnt get much ending to him, just last heard still asleep from surgery.
In short, the depth on everyone was shallow.
Kinda makes me wanna rewrite it so it actually makes sense and have some depth to its consequence lol. Add on to the author's work so it actually reaches the potential it deserves. Love the art but even a fool like me who doesnt care heavily on flawwed storylines still have some basic criticism.
Who knows, I hope in the future I remember this story and make my own inspired short work with the ending it deserves
So many flaws in the plot and relationships, way too much context left behind and the rush of chemistry just left me unsatisfied. The creepy side of ML was brushed off too quickly and MC has no boundaries despite being shown he's a fighter who wont take shit so easily. Creepy insane stalker also doesnt get much ending to him, just last heard still asleep from surgery.
In short, the depth on everyone was shallow.
Kinda makes me wanna rewrite it so it actually makes sense and have some depth to its consequence lol. Add on to the author's work so it actually reaches the potential it deserves. Love the art but even a fool like me who doesnt care heavily on flawwed storylines still have some basic criticism.
Who knows, I hope in the future I remember this story and make my own inspired short work with the ending it deserves