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The story concept got me excited but it was poorly executed…

burgerking June 15, 2026 8:54 am

Some reactions felt out of place, the dialogue was a bit clunky at times, and the random inclusion of ai??? Also, personal bias, I hate takumi and maybe if he got more chapters to flesh out his character my opinion would change but he’s so unlikable… At least the art is pretty I guess

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