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man what a rollercoaster

Croas June 15, 2026 2:11 pm

This was great. Well.. mostly. The pacing was bad toward the end. A few more chapters to flesh out the ending would have been much better. Plus there were scenes where....you're like wtf happened. It doesn't explain how they are suddenly in a new place. It feels like whiplash. Then there's the ending...I liked seeing the future but it would have been good seeing more of what happened to the other characters in the story.

As for the dog food....I thought that was freaking hilarious. Like he saw then as puppies rather than children and technically they are puppies until they get their human form so I doubt dog food would harm them. It's good the mom was there to make him understand that they are werewolves and not just puppies. Honestly both parents are very selfish and obsessed with each other more than anything else though. The mom less so but it's still apparent as the daughter marriane points out. I think that's as good as it's gonna get as for parenting from them.

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