I'm only a few chapters in and I have a plethora of perverted kinks that this one aligns with, but there's just something about it that's making me hesitant about continuing. I think the story(probably just the adaptation) has a pacing problem. Sometimes it's too fast you don't really get to feel or experience the character's emotions and thoughts you just skim through it and they tell you oh I felt that way and then sometimes a scene just drags on. Like specially if you wanna show an action scene it has to be a bit more interesting. I don't know it's a bit disappointing but I'm curious if this specific problem i have would get better in the future chapters or not? Like should I ignore my boredom as it will become gripping later on?
I'm only a few chapters in and I have a plethora of perverted kinks that this one aligns with, but there's just something about it that's making me hesitant about continuing. I think the story(probably just the adaptation) has a pacing problem. Sometimes it's too fast you don't really get to feel or experience the character's emotions and thoughts you just skim through it and they tell you oh I felt that way and then sometimes a scene just drags on. Like specially if you wanna show an action scene it has to be a bit more interesting. I don't know it's a bit disappointing but I'm curious if this specific problem i have would get better in the future chapters or not? Like should I ignore my boredom as it will become gripping later on?