okay this was weird, on one hand at the start it did get me to care about the characters, ...

okay this was weird, on one hand at the start it did get me to care about the characters, and the logic behind the online and offline relationship wasn't nonsense, it was stupid but not nonsense, but then i was angry at ml cause why do you get to keep your 5year friend in this scenario while mc will end up thinking his 5 year friend And crush ghosts him?? you dont wanna lose him but youre fine with mc losing "him"??? also it suddenly rushed into a mess of a plot, like it was fine first but then wtf was his sudden attraction and taking advantage of him while hes that drunk AND THEN twisting it as if ml has any place to be offended that mc thought it was his dream,,, and to go as far as to call mc the one who used him,,,, and then tryna get mc to be with his offline self by guilt and stuff when he has feeling for the online one, bruh that was shit writing just to move the plot along.

like first it was as if "how cna he like him when he knows nothing" but then turns out theyve been there for each other through some shit, and knowing that, how are you gonna tell mc "ok forget him and like me instead"??

BUT ALSOOOOOOOOOOOOO it was just extremely stupid cause the whole reason you decided to keep both being you a secret is cause you thought you didnt like him and youd reject him online and be only friends offline, but if you already developed feelings, as messy as it would've been, you could've still confessed that you actually found out mc is mc and you also developed feelings so choosing you would be choosing both of you, there isn't a split choice between online and offline, and itd probably feel better to know that as mc too, and not let it simmer till it blows up the way it did. The moment ml got feelings too, keeping this a secret was just stupid cause it defeated the whole purpose like bruh

but then also feels like they really just turned the wheel to slam any and every type of trauma onto them. cause wdym hes gonna have a toxic masculine army general dad, psycho mom that controls him AND sexually abuses him, CAUSE WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHE PIMPED HIM TO SOME OTHER RICH GUY'S DAUGHTER, AND WHEN HE LEFT HER AT THE HOTEL SHE HIRED PEOPLE TO FUCK IN FRONT OF HIM LOCKED IN A ROOM TO "TERACH HIM HOW ITS DONE" WHAT THE FUCK KIND OF PSYCHOTIC SHIT

but that's not enough, the one brother that's always on his side, the plot totally needed to throw shit on him from all sides, so even the good brother has to have some psycho out of character shit of spewing all that crap drunk???? like stuff like this isn't making me feel like its believable writing and making me mad at the character, it's making me feel like the writing's shit and doing whatever

but i do kinda like how the conflict was done a bit different about how mc finds out compared to other similar online offline stuff, like mc realizes quietly, hurts on his own, and ml figures out on his own that mc probably found out, and mc's logic is right, cause bro ye his choices were totally making a fool of him, wdym you approach him motivating him to have hope and confess to you when you dont feel the same, wdym you sit and listen to him gush about you, etc etc, like aaaaaaaaaaa but still kinda cute bad writing aside

also liked the character design and how theyre both in the same face style and not an alpha male with a baby uwu bottom, and the thick glasses