Honestly the only thing she did wrong was ending the story so abruptly. They literally just got together, we don’t even know their dynamic as a real couple yet. If she just added 10-15 chapters of how their relarionship would’ve been, having an in-depth talk about their feelings, JK doing the most because he’s still guilty for what he did to Dan, and things like that it would’ve been golden.
Honestly, rn it just feels like an incomplete story. The side stories better be long and it better scrath that itch.
exactly omg like i'll probably re-read again sometime but knowing it ends the way it does sucks. so unsatisfying sigh. hopefully the side stories will be pretty lengthy.
Honestly the only thing she did wrong was ending the story so abruptly. They literally just got together, we don’t even know their dynamic as a real couple yet. If she just added 10-15 chapters of how their relarionship would’ve been, having an in-depth talk about their feelings, JK doing the most because he’s still guilty for what he did to Dan, and things like that it would’ve been golden.
Honestly, rn it just feels like an incomplete story. The side stories better be long and it better scrath that itch.