I like it, but somehow every conversation turns into Judith. Like, every couple of chapters she talks about how her mother had a commoner lover, like, yeah, we get it, you can word it different. Also, everytime there's a scene we should empathize with a character, somehow the story write it as everyone feeling pity and empathize with Judith. Yeah, she's the MC, but can't we have a chapter without beign "oh poor Judith"
I like it, but somehow every conversation turns into Judith. Like, every couple of chapters she talks about how her mother had a commoner lover, like, yeah, we get it, you can word it different.
Also, everytime there's a scene we should empathize with a character, somehow the story write it as everyone feeling pity and empathize with Judith. Yeah, she's the MC, but can't we have a chapter without beign "oh poor Judith"