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Then stop reading ijbol..
Son when there's valid criticism y'all always response is "stop reading" im crine be creative and critical for once
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Then stop reading ijbol..
Son when there's valid criticism y'all always response is "stop reading" im crine be creative and critical for once
I like the flashbacks, we learn about the characters a lot, i don't even have an issue with it at first, considering the fact that i usually hate flashbacks, but oh goshhhhh this is starting to bore the hell out of me! Seriously, this is too long already! Authors should learn how to balance the execution of past with the present to avoid boring the readers.