After rereading sketch I came here to give this story its roses too for doing inexperienced top x experienced bottom so fucking well. I think one of the things stories like this just don’t do well is disregarding the concerns of the top pushing their boundaries, making them deal w the exes and flings around, etc. but THIS ONE. THIS ONE DOES IT RIGHT.
Some things this does fantastic: The bottom isn’t “punished” for his experiences. You get the reason he was promiscuous, but not once do u see his bitch ex, nor his flings, nor nothing. It was just exactly that - HIS PAST so it’s literally irrelevant.
The bottom never eyes another guy nor is there ever a risk of him sleeping with someone else even when he thinks bout it becuz you know what he does? Respect his feelings.
the top is incredibly firm on his boundaries but that doesn’t mean he’s not a yearner.
By all accounts even with the experiences, they’re on EQUAL PLAYING FIELDS. The top has his boundaries and ideals, and he simultaneously respects that the bottom had traumas he couldn’t fix for him, but he could be there for him! And same thing with the bottom, from job to school to aspiration he’s always just good with the top.
Best part - THEYRE SO HEALTHY!
They actually fucking communicate, even with the BDSM miscommunication it’s still something that’s discussed afterwards.
The bottom doesn’t dismiss the top ever with any of his insecurities and even with the miscommunication it’s IMMEDIATELY taken care of by the bottom. And vice versa it’s just so good.
After rereading sketch I came here to give this story its roses too for doing inexperienced top x experienced bottom so fucking well.
I think one of the things stories like this just don’t do well is disregarding the concerns of the top pushing their boundaries, making them deal w the exes and flings around, etc. but THIS ONE. THIS ONE DOES IT RIGHT.
Some things this does fantastic:
The bottom isn’t “punished” for his experiences. You get the reason he was promiscuous, but not once do u see his bitch ex, nor his flings, nor nothing. It was just exactly that - HIS PAST so it’s literally irrelevant.
The bottom never eyes another guy nor is there ever a risk of him sleeping with someone else even when he thinks bout it becuz you know what he does? Respect his feelings.
the top is incredibly firm on his boundaries but that doesn’t mean he’s not a yearner.
By all accounts even with the experiences, they’re on EQUAL PLAYING FIELDS. The top has his boundaries and ideals, and he simultaneously respects that the bottom had traumas he couldn’t fix for him, but he could be there for him! And same thing with the bottom, from job to school to aspiration he’s always just good with the top.
Best part - THEYRE SO HEALTHY!
They actually fucking communicate, even with the BDSM miscommunication it’s still something that’s discussed afterwards.
The bottom doesn’t dismiss the top ever with any of his insecurities and even with the miscommunication it’s IMMEDIATELY taken care of by the bottom. And vice versa it’s just so good.
I could go on and on bout how good these two are.