No need to sugarcoat it lmao, this is even worse than mid I've seen ppl dismissing criticism on pacing issues, but those are very valid claims. Forget rushed, the plot itself doesn't make much sense. It's obvious that this is the author's first work, this level of writing screams amateurish from all angles: the characters themselves, don't know what they're doing. Most of them basically serve no purpose whatsoever, on top of that no one is likable. Above all, the story doesn't know what it wants to tell.
The sex is somehow decent, all it's allure is basically just the switch factor and fox x wolf dynamic. That's it. 4/10
No need to sugarcoat it lmao, this is even worse than mid I've seen ppl dismissing criticism on pacing issues, but those are very valid claims. Forget rushed, the plot itself doesn't make much sense. It's obvious that this is the author's first work, this level of writing screams amateurish from all angles: the characters themselves, don't know what they're doing. Most of them basically serve no purpose whatsoever, on top of that no one is likable. Above all, the story doesn't know what it wants to tell.
The sex is somehow decent, all it's allure is basically just the switch factor and fox x wolf dynamic. That's it. 4/10