throughout reading this, i keep thinking about potential. Likee, this has HUGE potential if taken seriously. There were lots of heartfelt moments that could be developed.
But at the same time, if its lighthearted like it currently is, there really isn't a need to make this longer hahah. I wonder if the novel is as fast paced though.
some loose ends - the restaurant...!! - his horse demon friend - what does ray even do lol
throughout reading this, i keep thinking about potential. Likee, this has HUGE potential if taken seriously. There were lots of heartfelt moments that could be developed.
But at the same time, if its lighthearted like it currently is, there really isn't a need to make this longer hahah. I wonder if the novel is as fast paced though.
some loose ends
- the restaurant...!!
- his horse demon friend
- what does ray even do lol