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I’m confused with the storyline. Why does it cut out certain moments or jump from one si...

Cheeto-Stick June 21, 2026 3:06 am

I’m confused with the storyline. Why does it cut out certain moments or jump from one situation to another? Like chapter 13 ended with them in the room but chapter 14 began with the cafe.

They are too many gaps and it’s ruining my whole reading experience.

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    Glizzyimdripin June 21, 2026 3:58 am

    I thought I was the only one noticing that. Idk how I even feel abt the story too plus the plot is not plotting

    Cheeto-Stick June 21, 2026 4:43 am
    I thought I was the only one noticing that. Idk how I even feel abt the story too plus the plot is not plotting Glizzyimdripin

    Very true. The story was so interesting in the beginning few chapters but has fallen short. I’m so disappointed to drop this read.