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Nevermind I finished it and they did have some conflict but I feel like it was brushed under the rug too quickly. They didn't address his insecurity as much.
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Nevermind I finished it and they did have some conflict but I feel like it was brushed under the rug too quickly. They didn't address his insecurity as much.
Umm it's not a bad story and there's nothing wrong with it either but I genuinely just think it's lacking. There's something missing between the couple like I get the bottom guy being a socially awkward/anxious person and then his partner who understands him completely and talks for him and now they decided to get separated due to their goals, works and whatnot while the other guy is trying to be a lot more independent not just always depend on his partner like that's good no problem. But I also think that's what makes it a little unrealistic like there's no way you understand him completely and you guys have never had a misunderstanding with each other. There's not much development nor exploration about their relationship and that's why I think it lacks in my opinion, it's like pretty flat and boring. I think there was no build up of anything or conflict I just wish there was more so yeah I think I only went up to 2 or 3 chapters.