Can someone read this for me and tell me if it's good?

Not sure, it could be good but it's not there yet? While reading it I had a feeling that it's missing something, that it could be written way better and that it has some kind of plot holes, it just starts somewhere without a good reason/explanation.
Maybe I just think that because I read "Damn Reincarnation", "Swordmaster" and "The Legendary Hero is an Academy Honors Student" right before I read this

Thanks for the info. Good to know this one of those mass produced trash.