ethan, theon and ray look fine but dorothy and julia looks squiggly ??????? like they didn't know how their features would mature so they just gave them elongated bodies and hoped for the best... it's like i was born a king's daughter all over again.
also eh on their love story idk feels very flat and lacking like a good chunk of the 68 chapters i've read was just her AND the author dragging on her inner monologue of being good in this life like i think we got the point by ch 30.... also very mediocre world building i'm ngl like i saw that panel of julia walking thru the desert and that was the final nail in the coffin for me i fear
and her love interests are just very bland as well ???? ethan's choices and reasoning were very ERM while theon is just. there. both him and the author has done shit over the 4 years he was in dorothy's proximity.
nothing particularly good about this so might drop.
ethan, theon and ray look fine but dorothy and julia looks squiggly ??????? like they didn't know how their features would mature so they just gave them elongated bodies and hoped for the best... it's like i was born a king's daughter all over again.
also eh on their love story idk feels very flat and lacking like a good chunk of the 68 chapters i've read was just her AND the author dragging on her inner monologue of being good in this life like i think we got the point by ch 30.... also very mediocre world building i'm ngl like i saw that panel of julia walking thru the desert and that was the final nail in the coffin for me i fear
and her love interests are just very bland as well ???? ethan's choices and reasoning were very ERM while theon is just. there. both him and the author has done shit over the 4 years he was in dorothy's proximity.
nothing particularly good about this so might drop.