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I honestly liked it until the later chapters

Frosche79 June 23, 2026 7:47 pm

Because how in the world is this supposed to be a story with only 16 chapters? Like, are you fricking kidding me!

Also, I did not like the grape part, it was unnecessary. I didn't like the idea of the teacher and the King's brother being in love with a teen. So disgusting. I could tolerate anything, even an FL killing other people and manipulating everything. But to drug someone and have them graped, and the unnecessary pairing for older men to a teenage girl is NOT on my list.

Anyways, I really like the concept. But the pacing is too fast. They ended the story so early we didn't even see how the FL progressed her romance with the ML. Didn't see anything about the maid and FL's brother ending up together, they just sprung it on us at the last chapter, and why did they have kids first anyway? I thought for sure they were having the coronation at the last chapter and not a wedding. They didn't even give us the pleasure of watching the couple in their journey and mature.

Also, the fact that everything happened in just a day is beyond me. So unrealistic and unbelievable. I also don't believe that it had only been 3 years after the incident. The ML was so young back then, probably in middle school, and then three years later he looks 20 and had a 2-3 year old kid and a second baby. Like, don't tell me they had kids when they just got engaged as teens... Yeah??

The author just ruined it for us. At least make it believable and put 5 years not 3!

Okay, the longer I think about it the more I get pissed off. I'm out of here.

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