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solid story, weaker ending. it felt a little rushed with the baby suddenly coming out and ...

cockdestroyer June 23, 2026 11:00 pm

solid story, weaker ending. it felt a little rushed with the baby suddenly coming out and then we don’t get to see what exactly happens to the cousin and his parents. i’m sure if there’s side stories then the ending will feel a little smoother. i liked how we as the readers didn’t know the full story and it was revealed bit by bit. i also liked that instead of the mc never remembering his past self, the author sort of merged them together. overall, i think it was a good story. ml is one of the greenest flags ever although he is a bit of a pushover

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