The biggest issue with the absurd amount of abuse in this story, is that it is such wasted potential.
The art is good. The plot could have led to to do many places if handled properly. The characters reactions would even have made sense because by god teenagers can be dumb, if there had just been any kind of care taken to create something that wasn't just rape on rape.
Like... The MC already enjoys showing off on camera. But at no point does he even even think to himself "geez. This sounds kinda hot" as some sort of indication that it could be a fantasy of his. The consent is continuously not given. And not even in a CNC kind of way. It is just flat out SA.
And like ... I get it... Communication is hard. But like... Even with a severe suspension of belief, this is so far from romance.
I sincerely hope that anyone who reads this understands that this is in no way acceptable, realistic, or legal. Do not do this at home kids - or adults or whatever you are - just .. don't ..
Fuck... If I had not left my word smithery behind me, I would be tempted to rewrite this to a consensual exploration of sex rather than whatever this is supposed to be.
This really should have more trigger warnings or be on warning lists. Like... I cannot count the amount of rape in this.
A rape fantasy is only hot because it is something wanted. That is the fantasy part. Without it, it is just rape.
The biggest issue with the absurd amount of abuse in this story, is that it is such wasted potential.
The art is good. The plot could have led to to do many places if handled properly. The characters reactions would even have made sense because by god teenagers can be dumb, if there had just been any kind of care taken to create something that wasn't just rape on rape.
Like... The MC already enjoys showing off on camera. But at no point does he even even think to himself "geez. This sounds kinda hot" as some sort of indication that it could be a fantasy of his. The consent is continuously not given. And not even in a CNC kind of way. It is just flat out SA.
And like ... I get it... Communication is hard. But like... Even with a severe suspension of belief, this is so far from romance.
I sincerely hope that anyone who reads this understands that this is in no way acceptable, realistic, or legal. Do not do this at home kids - or adults or whatever you are - just .. don't ..
Fuck... If I had not left my word smithery behind me, I would be tempted to rewrite this to a consensual exploration of sex rather than whatever this is supposed to be.
This really should have more trigger warnings or be on warning lists. Like... I cannot count the amount of rape in this.
A rape fantasy is only hot because it is something wanted. That is the fantasy part. Without it, it is just rape.
Damn, bruh.