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Uhm ok i guess

Angelbabyprincess June 24, 2026 5:25 pm

Loved the beginning. There was yearning and mystery. Pacing felt off towards the end like it's one thing after the other and we're just rushing to an end.

And the omegaverse element seems like an afterthought. Or i guess, if you really think about it, it could just be a world where alphas and omegas aren't a big deal and they're just a normal part of the world in comparison to other omegaverse where literally almost every moment, you're reminded of pheromones and ruts etc.

Enjoyed it kinda. Omegaverse + mpreg I'm sold. Art is beautiful too.

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