Yeah some inner dialogues made me think whether it was truly fine bc dom never really checked for red lights ;-; I got anxious
Right!!! I was panicking when the sub's inner monologue saying that he didn't like it at first #－.－) like like he's tied up and being gagged, do they even have a nonverbal cue for the safeword??? It was so alarming that I can't even enjoy the smut ( ；∀；)
I feel like this might become a plot point later on in the story if the author remembers to
Especially in these latest chapters, they're missing the communication element that makes BDSM so intimate. Communication and consent are sooo sexy and it's just not here
I mean we're basically told after the fact that it was good and they both enjoyed it, but during the plays, neither the visuals nor dialogue paint a clear enough picture as to whether things are going well or if one of them is actually genuinely upset or being pushed too far which just makes me kinda stressed the whole time rather than really getting into it and being on board with what they're doing