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What's great about this story is that the FL is kind of a dum dum, but while other FLs like her are a hinderance to the plot progression, she drives the plot forward with her dumb behavior
And that's what makes it work soon much better
Its so stupidly funny and i love it. Do you know how hard it is to write plot, even harder to write funny plot? 10/10 stoy telling for sure