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I like the whole vibe of this story but the author really need to improve in arranging the...

143ILY June 26, 2026 4:35 pm

I like the whole vibe of this story but the author really need to improve in arranging the plot. Sometimes its hard to know which was the past and which is the present. They do flashbacks so suddenly.

Basically:
they meet accidentally- become friends- become too close - rumors spread- they kissed during retreat- lost contact for a while - reunite with drunken kiss - and then now the present main story

Like when Dowoon said Jin used to reject him, I was so confused cause I thought Jin didn’t know about his feeling, when did Dowoon ever confessed? Also, Dowoon actually knew about Jin’s feelings all this time but he still avoiding it?

I know lots of it were answered at the end, but it was quite confusing trying to connect the dots

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