Look I think this story is a nice, creative new twist on the regression shoujo genre. I love the characters, I love the dynamics, and I think its completely ADORABLE. However. . . I fear I have no motivation to continue reading it. I mean, while I do enjoy the story, something about it leaves more to be desired. Im not sure if its the odd plot structure, or the superficial feeling of the relationships, but its missing an "oooooh" factor. Many parts of the story even feel as though they've been thrown together simply for the sake of being a means to an end, an example being the discussion regarding Melody's regression(as well as the nature behind it), and even her so called "power"---its all very vague and empty. Along with this--while I do love the male leads--I feel like there has not been PROPER build up with any of them. This isn't to say that they don't have chemistry with each other (Claude is especially exempt from this as his and Melody's chemistry is far too clear), but they miss the substance that makes you crave more of their, and melody's, story together, leaving a kind of plateau when it comes to reader's romantic expectations. Now, for the sake of brevity im going to leave it at this, because I doubt anyone is going to acknowledge this comment, but I really dont mean to say this is bad by any means, it just has proven to lack something to keep me going on reading. I perchance may pick it back up again and follow it through, but for now I'm gonna move on.
Look I think this story is a nice, creative new twist on the regression shoujo genre. I love the characters, I love the dynamics, and I think its completely ADORABLE. However. . . I fear I have no motivation to continue reading it.
I mean, while I do enjoy the story, something about it leaves more to be desired. Im not sure if its the odd plot structure, or the superficial feeling of the relationships, but its missing an "oooooh" factor. Many parts of the story even feel as though they've been thrown together simply for the sake of being a means to an end, an example being the discussion regarding Melody's regression(as well as the nature behind it), and even her so called "power"---its all very vague and empty. Along with this--while I do love the male leads--I feel like there has not been PROPER build up with any of them. This isn't to say that they don't have chemistry with each other (Claude is especially exempt from this as his and Melody's chemistry is far too clear), but they miss the substance that makes you crave more of their, and melody's, story together, leaving a kind of plateau when it comes to reader's romantic expectations. Now, for the sake of brevity im going to leave it at this, because I doubt anyone is going to acknowledge this comment, but I really dont mean to say this is bad by any means, it just has proven to lack something to keep me going on reading. I perchance may pick it back up again and follow it through, but for now I'm gonna move on.