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Currently at Ch 27. I don't get why Sasya is clinging to Karel now that he already moved on. Why of all the chances and time you have when Karel needs you, you weren't there? He's been looking for you all those gruesome years while in war. Why didn't you reach out even once within those years? Now that he's starting to build a new life, you start to appear again begging for his attention. What happen to you during those years? Did you try to run away and leave Karel just like that? From what/who?! Did someone force you to leave?
Edit 1/?: Now at Ch 38. SAME THOUGHT WITH THE MADAME. Now Karel is away, you will drift away from him. Like how did you get to that conclusion, Sasya? It's like you're saying now that Karel is not there for you (in prison bcs of you), you can abandon him now. I mean you can still thrive and keep on living while also keeping in mind of waiting for Karel to come back. I thought you're happy with Karel. Moving forward leaving the past is understandable, but also leaving Karel behind? Why?? I'm confused. I don't get you.
PERSONAL NOTE ONLY PLEASE READ 》 This comment is dedicated for personal criticism. Please DON'T MIND THIS and I humbly ask you to NOT REPLY TO THIS. I haven't finished reading the story yet so if you still want to read this comment, DON'T take it too personal. Thanks a bunch!
Currently at Ch 27. I don't get why Sasya is clinging to Karel now that he already moved on. Why of all the chances and time you have when Karel needs you, you weren't there? He's been looking for you all those gruesome years while in war. Why didn't you reach out even once within those years? Now that he's starting to build a new life, you start to appear again begging for his attention. What happen to you during those years? Did you try to run away and leave Karel just like that? From what/who?! Did someone force you to leave?
Edit 1/?:
Now at Ch 38. SAME THOUGHT WITH THE MADAME. Now Karel is away, you will drift away from him. Like how did you get to that conclusion, Sasya? It's like you're saying now that Karel is not there for you (in prison bcs of you), you can abandon him now. I mean you can still thrive and keep on living while also keeping in mind of waiting for Karel to come back. I thought you're happy with Karel. Moving forward leaving the past is understandable, but also leaving Karel behind? Why?? I'm confused. I don't get you.