The plot could have been built better. For a random story I selected, ts is disappointing. I wanted to not be too serious about this but the writing is just not it. It's just pay gorn with the author trying to give it plot, and it's not working. I'm still ch 16 tho, but it could have been better. The author is trying to build a plot while not actually keeping rational character building. Wdym you're contemplating having sex with someone, while you actually JUST DIED. Like wdym you're freaking free when you JUST DIED. Like, priority be nowhere. Am I just overthinking this tho. But, I mean. It could've been built better. I saw potential and then none.
The plot could have been built better. For a random story I selected, ts is disappointing. I wanted to not be too serious about this but the writing is just not it. It's just pay gorn with the author trying to give it plot, and it's not working. I'm still ch 16 tho, but it could have been better. The author is trying to build a plot while not actually keeping rational character building. Wdym you're contemplating having sex with someone, while you actually JUST DIED. Like wdym you're freaking free when you JUST DIED. Like, priority be nowhere. Am I just overthinking this tho. But, I mean. It could've been built better. I saw potential and then none.