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Loose plot

Nayu Mazu June 30, 2026 6:17 pm

The plot actually feel more like a story being put together clumsily to reach an agreed ending. Some part feel too sudden or too obvious. I enjoy it when I binge read it, like it start from a bit of mystery and has conclusion, otherwise it lacked good pacing(?) or complexity or depth. The art is nice tho. And lastly,

PAPAPA IS ALWAYS THE SOLUTION!

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