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I'm guessing this story will be short? That's why the pacing is incredibly fast
Ahh yeah I did hear that it might be a short story, that’s probably why
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I'm guessing this story will be short? That's why the pacing is incredibly fast
Ahh yeah I did hear that it might be a short story, that’s probably why
This is so confusing? what is even going on anymore. The story keeps jumping from one place to another and throwing in random miscommunication and plot devices. Like was the incest really necessary? The whole relationship feels one-sided and the characters aren’t really fleshed out properly… I know it’s only been like 7 chapters but seriously