I came back to this again because I'm STILL PISSED OFF. I'M FUCKING TIRED. Rape is such a serious thing it impacts both the physical and psychological health of a person. Honestly reading it I was horrified because the face of pure dread and horror he had was horrible. And you're telling me he gets abused after this traumatizing scene??? Like why establish the gravity of such a situation only to lead to more horrible shit and I'm betting you my first born that 10 chapters later it will be like nothing even happened. And we'll get a happily ever after. They'll do like any other author and shrug off the long term consequences of such a thing. I wish authors had more INTENTIONAL WRITING. I'm not against rape being written!! But write it properly!! It's undermines real victims and the severity of it. A well written story can develop a situation and make it impactful. But this is just rape for shock value and relationship conflict. And FYI for those saying you don't sympathize because he was "emotionally" cheating or making his boyfriend jealous, it still DOES NOT justify him getting raped. If you write something devastating, treat it as it is!!
I came back to this again because I'm STILL PISSED OFF. I'M FUCKING TIRED. Rape is such a serious thing it impacts both the physical and psychological health of a person. Honestly reading it I was horrified because the face of pure dread and horror he had was horrible. And you're telling me he gets abused after this traumatizing scene??? Like why establish the gravity of such a situation only to lead to more horrible shit and I'm betting you my first born that 10 chapters later it will be like nothing even happened. And we'll get a happily ever after. They'll do like any other author and shrug off the long term consequences of such a thing. I wish authors had more INTENTIONAL WRITING. I'm not against rape being written!! But write it properly!! It's undermines real victims and the severity of it. A well written story can develop a situation and make it impactful. But this is just rape for shock value and relationship conflict. And FYI for those saying you don't sympathize because he was "emotionally" cheating or making his boyfriend jealous, it still DOES NOT justify him getting raped. If you write something devastating, treat it as it is!!