Not a bad concept just wished it was fleshed out more. Especially with the curse's history and its relations to prophets and god and the moon being kinda unique. Or maybe my reading comprehension skills just that shit, cuz i feel like theres better ways to communicate that radan is the 'reincarnation' of the ice goddess and thats why hes destined to hate the prince. That scene before he fully recovers from shock amnesia (with the now cursed ice spirit) was confusing the first read, really coulda done better w it :/
Also they really didnt make sense why prince leshak was so head over heels for radan, he was a warrior, and a well known celebate who didnt involve himself with anyone, not even prostitutes. So its so weird and kinda forced/rushed to see him fall in love w radan so quickly within the span of his stay in the camp (what was it? Like a few weeks or a month most?). Missed potential for better world and chara building imo
But all in all its a unique plot. Good story for mindless reading
Not a bad concept just wished it was fleshed out more. Especially with the curse's history and its relations to prophets and god and the moon being kinda unique. Or maybe my reading comprehension skills just that shit, cuz i feel like theres better ways to communicate that radan is the 'reincarnation' of the ice goddess and thats why hes destined to hate the prince. That scene before he fully recovers from shock amnesia (with the now cursed ice spirit) was confusing the first read, really coulda done better w it :/
Also they really didnt make sense why prince leshak was so head over heels for radan, he was a warrior, and a well known celebate who didnt involve himself with anyone, not even prostitutes. So its so weird and kinda forced/rushed to see him fall in love w radan so quickly within the span of his stay in the camp (what was it? Like a few weeks or a month most?). Missed potential for better world and chara building imo
But all in all its a unique plot. Good story for mindless reading